What are you doing, @harvestbird?

15 August, 2009

in poems,tumblr

Colloquy with this post.

Form

#Writing with a famine of #keystrokes.
This invisible salon exerts a vacuum.

I feel the short-form’s #pressure
to finely-turn my phrases.

Censoring, in slowish motion,
my duties, #fears and pleasures.

Where elsewhere I might lumber,
here, I yet #fizz.

Content

Either:

It is here much like anywhere else:
define #yourself by what you’re not.
Long-spar with life’s antagonists
in constant flow of idle #words.

Or:

I was #hapu there
and then I was not.

Or:

Attention seeking
becomes attention deflecting.
Sometimes on the internet
too many people, #listening.

After W.H. #Auden

Twitter makes nothing happen:
it survives, flows on south
From the busy griefs; it survives,
A way of happening ( #lol !), a mouth.





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Kay 15 August, 2009 at 19:04

I love this.

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harvestbird 15 August, 2009 at 19:09

Thank you! I find that as I prepare my regular commission at Giovanni’s place, I want more and more to write things that reflect the online medium, that engage somehow with the fact the poems are appearing online. This only scratches the surface (I haven’t, for example, created an intentional thematic in the hashtagged-words, although I’d be happy for anyone to infer one) but it’s a start!

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