Seven Sisters (on Matariki)

3 July, 2009

in poems, tumblr

Colloquy with this post.

At Seven Sisters I changed
(I think) to Edmonton Green.
To the north of North London.

There was a low-rise mall, with
market traders. You could walk
(I think) to Enfield Lock.

It wasn’t a long visit, but I forced
some decisions.

They may not have been the best,
but they were mine.

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Giovanni 3 July, 2009 at 21:38

In the time-honoured tradition of expressing my appreciation in a different place of postage each time – I loved this.

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harvestbird 5 July, 2009 at 13:50

Thank you. I felt completely overwhelmed by the poem which followed! What I hope to do at the end of the year is round up my squibs and fragments and choose some for revision and elaboration.

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Giovanni 5 July, 2009 at 14:02

I felt completely overwhelmed by the poem which followed!

Serves you right – now you know how I feel! But yes, it was pretty special. I took the liberty of moving both to the main page and will leave the post up for another week.

I was going to update the compendium so if you allowed me to use the revised poems it would be splendid – just let me know how you get on in the duest of courses.

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harvestbird 5 July, 2009 at 19:42

Without wishing to be cheesy, you honour me by keeping my work in such company.

Go ahead and update the compendium. I’m thinking of a longer-term project in terms of revision–maybe for publication in another medium?

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Giovanni 5 July, 2009 at 20:49

Wait: are there other media?!?

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